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Monday, March 28, 2016

Story Excerpt | Ashley's Dark Awakening Chapter 4

This is a work-in-progress still, and the chapter is not yet finished. Due to popular demand though, here's an excerpt from its beginning.

“Okay, that’s good. Now just lift up your shirt and relax.”

Doctor Alyson Graham squeezed a little dab of gel onto Ashley’s stomach. Even though it was warm she still jumped a little.

“Don’t worry, just relax,” Doctor Alyson smiled and began rubbing it gently over her skin, “Just think of it like a massage for you and the baby. You’ll both like it then.”

“Alright…” Ashley heard herself say far-off, watching the doctor’s hand running over her apparent belly bump in small circles.

“This must be your first, correct?” Ashley nodded, and she continued, “I could tell. I was just as jumpy as you when I was pregnant the first time. You must be about six months along now, right?”

“Y-yes…” Ashley glanced over at her doctor, a raven-haired woman at just about her own size. She hardly looked older than a college graduate, much less a mother. From what she could see of her figure beneath her light-blue uniform, Ashley knew motherhood hadn’t ravaged her body like the horror stories. The girl swallowed her nervousness and asked, “How many kids do you have?”

“Two boys,” She beamed and traced Ashley’s eyes to her own body and gave a little smile, “And the way I look now, my husband is definitely not going to be slowing down. So don’t worry – you’re young, so you’ll bounce right back into shape in no time after this little one is born. You’ll be just like before.”

“Just like before…” Ashley looked back down at her swollen belly. “How could I ever go back?” She knew she couldn’t. Before she was a good girl – never had sex, waiting for the right boy, and planning to marry only after college. But now she was pregnant from a man she hardly knew, a man who was happy to knock up her white body, a man whose baby would undoubtedly be as dark as him.

“Hehe, you should have seen how big I got…” Doctor Alyson continued, “I was probably twice your size by your time, and I still had four months to go!” Ashley nodded and tried to smile. All the sporting and exercise must have helped in keeping her own belly rather compact. The tight swell gradually built up like the round of an egg until it subsided just below her ribcage. Nevertheless, no amount of track and field could hide her tummy now. Looking down she could only barely see her toes poking up beyond her gravid midsection.

“Ahhh, there we go… Found you,” The doctor murmured, and Ashley felt a sudden jolt of panic as the doctor turned to her and said those fateful words:

“Ashley, would you like to see your baby?”

“I… Y-yes please…” Ashley managed in hardly a whisper.  Slowly the doctor rotated the monitor, and soon Ashley could see it clearly. The black-and-white screen shimmered and pulsed, an ultrasound that uncovered the reason why Ashley’s belly was swelling right then.

“Don’t worry if you can’t see, most new mothers can’t make out-”

“I can see,” The doctor must have seen the look on Ashley’s face, and fell quiet too. The fuzzy image gently swayed and moved, but Ashley could easily see the little body of her baby. Slightly curled and somewhat looking like an overgrown peanut, the fetus shifted a little as it responded to the cold touch of the ultrasound. “That’s… my baby?”

“Oh yes,” the doctor chuckled and smiled, “That’s your baby alright.”

“It’s so small though…” Ashley stared at the monitor, the tiny shape that hardly seemed larger than her fist was the reason her belly had grown so huge.

“They start off like that, but they get much bigger once you get towards your third trimester. Trust me,” the doctor rubbed her own stomach. “Would you like to know the gender of your baby?”

“I… Well, I uh…” It was all so real now. Ashley looked to the monitor, then to Doctor Alyson, and back again. “I’m not sure…”

“Some couples like to keep it a surprise, but sometimes curiosity gets the better of them. No surprise what happens then, right?”

“You’re telling me,” Ashley touched her belly lightly and watched her occupied womb shift ever so slightly. Curiosity getting the better of her got Ashley into this situation in the first place, when she simply couldn’t say no to Derren or his big black cock. She wondered how the gender would be the least o the surprise in store for everyone once she gave birth to his baby.

The doctor laughed and re-positioned the monitor, sliding the little tool over every inch of Ashley’s belly. “You’ll be coming for checkups often enough, so I’ll let you and the father think about it, alright?”

“Okay,” Ashley said. The image of Derren’s baby inside her had burned into her memory. She hadn’t seen his face since the night she told him she was pregnant. Still, almost every night when hormones got the better of her, she thought of him while soaking her panties with her frantic fingering.

The doctor pressed the tool against one side, and suddenly Ashley felt a pop inside her belly. Startled, she looked up at the doctor who simply beamed.

“A kick,” she said, “You have a very healthy baby, Ashley. Must take after daddy, hmmm?”

“Oh… a kick…” Like an official sign that life was growing inside her, the last length of confirmation settled into her chest. The baby – no, her black baby – was alive and well inside her pale belly. She nodded without thinking, and the doctor continued.

“Heh, I know how excited I was when I saw my little one’s when they came. They looked just like their father… Yours will too, you know.”

“God, I know…” Ashley looked down at her stomach, remembering how just half a year ago her virgin womb had never even felt a cock before. Now, five months later it was filling out nicely with an African man’s baby growing inside…


  1. YES!!! Thank you thank you thank you! I can't wait to read the rest of it! Will Derren show up? Or Jayson? Will Dawn get involved and fall to black cock too?? Well, That could happen in later chapters...God I can't wait. Thanks again!

  2. To be honest I can never really get into black breeding stories. While they can get me going at times being so focused on the details of the impreg/preggo kink, they mostly leave me feeling unsatisfied afterwards, if I can finish at all. But honestly your writings are so solid I can skim over those uber-racist stretches and still thoroughly enjoy the bits focused on breedings and their consequences, even when all my other sources have grown stale.

    So I suppose I'm saying keep up the good work! You're talented and know what to do with it.

    (And maybe I can request the baby comes out as a girl that actually takes after Ashley looks wise? Nearly ever bb fic has the woman popping out a prehung BBC boy that's more or less a clone of the father. But then again, I'm the type who thinks it would be a kick for the kid to come out "white" in some genetic fluke, so my opinions are in the minority. )

    1. Thanks for your encouragement, even as the genre isn't your cup of tea! I've actually noticed that as a writer, it is difficult to cover a kink like interracial breeding, which has quite a bit of raceplay, and to adequately cover other interesting focuses. Like if it is a non-interracial focused story, I literally have more sentences describing other features of interest.

      What I like in the black breeding genre is the intense focus on the naughtiness of the impregnation risk and reality. You only ever get similar flavors of it in incest, non-human, and maybe non-consent stuff generally. But as a writer, I should practice making what I enjoy reading most: Intense breeding whatever the kinky scenario is!

    2. Oh, to answer your question, Ashley's baby is a girl and predictably lighter-skinned than the father, so at least that is a bit different than the naughty norm!

  3. I cannot wait for this chapter to come out! :)

  4. That's good to hear you're working to break away from some of the norms of the genre. And that's a interesting point you made about how you have more room to play with in non-interracial stories.

    And while I have your attention, mind if I ask if you'd ever consider writing a futanari based story? Apologies if that's already been asked, but I've always imagined your take on the subject being a something of a mix between Ashley's Dark Awakening and Sandy's Showing Lie. ( Basically, anyways. My imagination can never seem to stop tinkering with it.)

    1. I had an idea for a caption series about women impregnating one another in various ways - like full-on futa stuff to parthenogenesis and so on. But I haven't made any of that yet.

      If I had a story in mind I might consider writing one, though I don't have any ideas right now. I think it would be somewhat based on a hentai comic I once read about a girl discovering that her female friend had a cock, so they fuck and it's pretty cute.

      I do know that CuteCindyHoney over on The ImpregNation writes about futa stories almost exclusively.

  5. I do love the sound of woman on woman/ futa impgregnation. Love to read about that. ;)

    How is the chapter coming along? No rush. :)

  6. I'm so glad that you have used the idea for the ultrasound! This scene is really hot! It gets really excited for what's to come!

  7. God, can't wait! How long til we can read it?!

  8. How goes the new Ch? Just came across your "Ashley" series and! It is so hot and naughty! Didn't think I would like the breeding portion but I've been getting more and more excited as the chapters continue! Keep up the fantastic work!

  9. This is the best story I ever read. Please continue.

  10. When can we expect the continuation?

  11. Thanks so much, I loved the Ashley series, Please don't stop writing, love your use of the Ebonics'I should love for Ashley to go on as she has accepted her true calling, breed her again, using the language of dirty nasty talk to remind her who she is Thanks again.

  12. Has there been any progress on this story?

  13. Unfortunately progress on it has been slow. Other projects combined with a misplacement of my notes has caused the great delay. I am unsure when it will be completed, though it is certainly a goal of mine given its positive reception (and fun of it to write).

  14. This is the best erotic story I've ever read, just found it today and already read it three times, please continue it you're an amazing writer.

  15. Please Darren we waiting so long...

  16. Any chance of us seeing Chapter 4 this year?? *fingers crossed*