My adventures into self-publishing
continue, and with new explorations come new necessities. Pleasing my readers through
excellent storytelling is certainly my top priority. Quality doesn’t just
appear in a vacuum though, so I have decided to begin looking for volunteer alpha
readers for my premium stories.
First though, an update on my current
writing. Tami’s Last Tease, the new name for Beach Party Rape, has been edited
once and now awaits a beta-reading before publishing sometime next week. Right
now the non-consensual tale stands at a little over 9,000 words, with bareback
drugged sex being just the beginning of the bitchy cocktease Tami’s woes. I
have also have a preliminary cover page nearly complete to accompany the
story’s release.
So with Tami’s Last Tease to be released
very soon, I have to begin work on my next saucy tale. Work on the prehistoric
breeding story is well underway, and it should come swifter than the
longer-than-anticipated Tami story. I also have plans to release Tara’s
Breeding on Smashwords for free once I can create a proper cover picture for
it. Since that has been by far my most read story thus far, it deserves a
little wider publication.
Back to point, why do I want alpha readers?
Like my love for feedback on this blog, I very much enjoy receiving constructive
criticism on my work. Outside eyes can spot mistakes, convey emotional impact,
and tell me whether or not my characters and descriptions are working. Though I
do not implement all of the proposed changes, my stories have always been
improved from an outside reader’s thoughts.
Sadly though, I do not have a large pool
of alpha readers to call on. Great alpha readers would be literate individuals
who enjoy the risky sex genre and are willing to provide honest and
constructive feedback so the story might improve in its revision. Obviously my
blog readers have an interest in what kinds of topics I enjoy, and if you are reading
this you are indeed literate. All that leaves is a willing eagerness to provide
feedback for draft-level stories in return for the free completed works.
The Proposal
For those interested in becoming my
premium story alpha readers, I will provide early-draft access and a free copy
of completed works given these conditions:
1) You send a valid email address along
with what genres really interest you (like NC, incest, non-human, etc…) and why
I should pick you as an alpha reader to garret98768@gmail.com
2) Once you have read the story draft I
send to your email, you return detailed feedback via email concerning:
Story/Plot/Character Impressions
Favorite Parts (and Least Favorite if
applicable)
Technical Errors (Spelling, Grammar)
Other Suggestions For Improvement
3) You give an honest rating to the completed
story when you receive it on the sales page.
This is a mutualistic relationship: In
return for free premium stories, my alpha readers provide constructive feedback
and honest ratings for my stories. I benefit from a greater product and more
sales, and you benefit from receiving the fruits of my most fruitful labor free
of charge!
Of course I expect good feedback and
participation from my alpha readers. I will pick those who have an affinity towards
the genre of my upcoming works and who are most helpful and prompt in their
feedback, and those who do not provide good feedback won’t stay on the list for
long. Those who are honest, detailed, and prompt will find themselves with free
copies of my premium works quite frequently.
All in all, I look forward to seeing your
applications! A chance to receive porn for free always is an exciting prospect
for me, and I hope many of you will think the same.
Other News
I recently received an interesting
request from JWTies, owner of Taboo Diaries and maker of many an incest-themed
risky sex video. His most recent project is entitled ‘Please Papi’, starring the
very nubile and lovely Jessi Grey. Jessi is rather special, not just for her
petite and fuckable body and pretty smile, but also because she survived a
four-year battle with brain cancer.
To say that was rough is an understatement,
and I am such a big softy when it comes to cute girls in such dire straits. And
now this tough cutie is getting into erotic film, and I doubt she could have
started with a nicer company than JWTies. He makes it a personal mission to
make sure his actresses are comfortable and enjoy themselves, and damn does Jessi
deserve to have some fun after enduring that hell.
The film is lightly based on her unique
story, with her character uncertain of her future prospects and finding comfort
in her Papi’s arms. What starts as a want for simple reassurance turns carnal,
and they have a bareback romp that very well could be her last. But it is not,
for the procedure goes well and our Jessi survives, as well as her desire to
continue playing kinky with her dear father. Protection is pretty much
forgotten, and it’ll only be a matter of time before she recovers enough to put
her daddy’s seed to good use…
Anyway, you can read the story at the
JWTies Productions Blog and view/purchase the film in the Taboo Diaries video
library under the name 'Please Papi'. Enjoy! And I wish adorable Jessi the best in her no doubt fruitful
enterprise!
It
has been a longer development than I anticipated by far, but finally after
hours of writing and even more in editing, my latest premium story has finally been
published!
“Not yet, slut.” Seth pulled out so fast Tami cried out. Her
stretched pussy refused to let go. She felt gutted. He slapped her clit with
his turgid meat, the impacts shuddering through her whole body and making her
dissatisfied belly twinge. Desire drowned out any relief she had, and her knot
refused to come undone.
“Knock up!? Oh god no!” The words echoed in Tami’s ears. He was
on her before she could hope to crawl away. He caught the angle of her hips and
pulled her back. When he found her still-gaping hole, he buried his naked
member without hesitation.
