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Monday, January 5, 2015

New Year's Feedback Thread of 2015

Hello one and all, wankers and wankettes alike. Happy New Year! Here on Impregnation Erotica, I like receiving the feedback from my loyal viewers about how to improve my blog.

The goal of Impregnation Erotica has always been to become the best hub for everything impreg-erotic, serving as a repository for cum-worthy sites and fertile grounds for my works and the works of others. My service is a labor of love, or rather an ordeal of orgasms, in that I want to provide the kind of site I wish I had to point me in the right directions for my all-time favorite risky kink.

Given the time of year, now is a great time to make new Resolutions, some of which I already have a mind toward in the coming months, and others which depend on you, loyal viewers, to recommend to me. I read all comments on my main blog and take them into consideration and regularly check my mail on Tumblr, so read on if you are interested in seeing a glimpse of the fertile future of Impregnation Erotica.

Current Plans for 2015

Right now there are a few exciting updates to my blog that may interest my viewers:

The begin with as I mentioned in my Sponsored Sites Update, I have the pleasure of working with Jay Naylor in reporting on many of his excellent works. Of all the anthropomorphic artists who regularly pen adult comics of note, I place Jay Naylor at the top of the heap when it comes to depicting some of the sexiest, hottest, most intense insemination impregnation stories out there.

If you are not familiar with any of his work, I think you are going to be in for a treat. Working from the back of his library started a little more than a decade ago, you will get to enjoy peeks at his artwork and enjoy the massive improvements in his style and artistic control from story to story. Even one of his earliest works that he now is somewhat embarrassed to show from its earlier artistic origins is one of the best breeding-centric comics out there! And to truly kick off this series, Jay Naylor has given me permission to post the full story for all my viewers to enjoy!

While this arrangement is still preliminary and liable to change, I have high hopes for getting an insider’s look at Jay Naylor’s library of works and giving exclusive peeks at his premium collection that can be found nowhere else on the web. Best of all, it gives me something new to post altogether – how fortunate for me!

The next change on my list is to continue creating more of my new and improved captions. Many may have noticed the slump in my posting of original captions a few months ago, and the reason was that I simply ran out of my stores created nearly a decade ago over many a horny foray into Paint.

Now, having grown a little older and wiser, I have decided to continue my work captioning photos that just scream sexy to me on Photoshop. My library of images reaches into the thousands, and that is more than enough to keep my busy for a long, long time! And with my improved skill in captioning, I imagine the results will be of a quality I can be proud of.

Alongside some of the generic captioned pictures that range in topics from incest to romance, I have a few caption projects I would like to attend to. You may be familiar with my ‘black breeding’ interracial impregnation caption panels, but did you know I also have ‘white breeding’ panels in the works, alongside a supposed all-female future breeding scenario? I do! Well, the raw pictures for them at least. Give me a few horny days dedicated to them and not getting distracted by all the lovely tits and asses online and you too will see what is brewing in my head.

Finally, one of my all-round New Year resolutions is to really get going on my authorship of stories. ‘To become an author for real, and make real money,” is the wording I have on my little list, and what it means is that while I have been writing a bit here and there up until now, I want to really get moving on it.

I am planning on going back to school for business or awesome bio-tech engineering wizardry, and either one will require a real source of income. Impregnation Erotica started as a hobby along with my erotic writing, and I would much rather try to etch out a living enhancing and sharing some of my pleasures than scooping boxes into place on endless store shelves (not a bad job by the way, just not as fun as literature).

My personal stance on donations is this: I would rather offer something to those wishing to support me than to ask for a handout. If you would like to support my continued efforts on this blog and encourage my writing at the same time, buy some of my books and get a good wank out alongside your warm, fuzzy feeling of charity!

I have the time, I have the writing ability, and I have a ton of untapped horniness to spend. Not only would I highly enjoy making a decent income by doing what was and is a hobby I delight in, it would also give me some relief from refreshing and refining the kinky tales that I have to keep spinning around in my head lest I forget them. It’s a very busy place in here…

Alongside this new surge in writing, I really want to get to my free stories as well. I have a portion of the next chapter in Ashley’s Dark Awakening written and the rest eager to be penned and long overdue for it, another story of lusty antics in Baby Crazy, and the potential for a sexy ‘sequel’ to Tara’s Breeding. One story a month is easy enough to pull off, but I want more, and with more writing of premium stories comes more free stories that so many fans have been eagerly anticipating. I hope that I will be delivering on those expectations very soon.

Viewer Input Challenge

Now to my favorite part of these Feedback threads – hearing from all of you! Last time I learned that regularly scheduled updates pleased my viewers and thus I now post on Mondays and Fridays (at least), and other interesting things I could improve.

The gist of how this works is for every valid piece of constructive feedback I receive in this thread before next Friday, I will match it with a never-before-seen captioned picture in the next blog update. You are free to give feedback on anything blog-related, but in particular I am interested in the following:

1) What kinds of posts are your favorite, and why? For instance, last time people said that they enjoyed captioned picture posts a great deal because they could be silently viewed anywhere.

2) Is there a particular facet of impregnation, pregnancy, or risky sex that you would like me to explore? Is there a topic that hasn’t been covered much or at all that you would be interested in seeing more of?

3) What have you seen that is working for my premium book sales, and what could use improvement? Have you bought a book, why or why not, and what could I do to potentially earn your patronage?

If you have any other concerns, praise, or commentary that you please, but know that I will count only those comments that give some good constructive feedback with captioned pictures in the next update. The main blog of Impregnation Erotica has a good commentary system that allows for anonymity, but I will also accept Tumblr fan-mail if you prefer that instead.

Thank you for visiting my blog, and I look forward to making it an even better experience in the coming year!


  1. Thanks for the blog. For my own feedback: I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter of Ashley's Dark Awakening. I hope you make that a priority for your free stories.

    When you post hentai pics, please include the source if you know it.

    Good luck making premium stories a viable source of income. I have been trying to get into that as well. I have published a 90,000 word story on literotica, and noe have a 12000 word story I want to sell. Who do you use for cover art or do you do it yourself?

    Force yourself to write a page a day at least. It adds up quickly!

    1. Thank you for your feedback. 99% of the time I do not know the source of the pictures that I post since they come from image boards namely. However, I have had some luck sometimes using Google's reverse image search, though it doesn't work for all of them.

      As for writing, thanks for the tip! I've noticed that writing a little every day helps a lot, not just in getting things done but also getting in the 'writing groove'. I've done the cover art myself after purchasing pictures for commercial use in a month-plan that let me get a nice library to start up with, and edit in Photoshop. Send me an email if you want to know more.

  2. I love your blog! My favorite is the captioned pictures, especially your newer ones. A type I haven't seen before that I really enjoy is impregnation sex where the girl is cheating on her husband and getting pregnant behind his back, making him raise the kid as his own.
    Unfortunately, I have never read any of your books because reading a book just doesn't do it for me. I would consider reading them if it was a (very) short story, 2000 words or less.
    Anyways, like I said before, I love the blog, keep up the great work!

    1. Thanks for your feedback and compliments. You know, I think it is rare for a story to go the whole gambit so to speak, from insemination to post-birth. Usually they jump around. I know that a few Illustrated Interracial stories have that 'cuckold raises the illegitimate offspring' idea. Still, it is a fun idea!

      Interesting about the short-short story idea. I was considering making a personal anthology collection with a bunch of 2000 - 3000 word stories, since most of my stories are 5,000+ words right now. Sometimes the short and sweet ones are the best.

  3. Glad to hear you joining up with Jay N. Some people love to hate him, but I can't deny that his adult stuff is hot, and I enjoy his non-adult comic (may the hiatus be short). Hope the partnership works!

    As for feedback... well... for me personally, there's a niche facet of impregnation that just doesn't get much attention anywhere; the sperm fertilizing the egg. (Naylor has certainly helped with this) During my teen years, the only stuff I had indicating sex were the opening scenes of the 'Look Who's Talking' movies, and hence my kink began and would later blossom. E-lit and rps usually scratch this itch the best. Drawn hentai has some of this, but not often, and I've seen it maybe 3 times in animated hentai. Live porn has nothing.

    I don't ask you to devote much energy to this, it's too niche to be worth your time really (and I've hunted for years, but haven't turned up much). But if you kept your eye out while doing your normal hunting, I would appreciate it.

    1. Thanks for the feedback. I think when any artist gets renowned enough, they'll attract various sized-groups of detractors. As far as my blog is concerned, he makes impregnation/breeding adult comics fairly frequently (just published another one called 'Mandy' even), and that is something I like and I think viewers of my blog will like.

      Oh man, the egg and sperm thing is as awesome as it is largely unexplored! SkrBr likes to use sperm and egg footage from documentaries spliced into many of his movies (well done edits, too), and I have written some scenes into my stories with 'visions' of eggs getting swamped by sperm and so on. PregChan has a few threads that have the 'moment of impregnation' that have a fair number of egg/sperm moments, but yeah it is hard to find animated depictions of it.

      I'll keep an eye out for new material in that regard. Our best bet to find it will be in nice documentaries that feature reproduction somehow.

    2. I have seen all of Naylor's stuff, and I quite enjoy it. I think I know this SkrBr you talk of but I'm not sure, and my google-fu is failing to find him. I haunt pregchan and post in the adventure thread there, though unfortunately the pics in the thread you mentioned rarely have sources. One of these days (when I'm no longer broke) I'll have to give your stories a try. (On a related note, an author named Lubrican does some great stuff that's more story heavy, but a lot of the time ends up with the girl pregnant, occasionally going into the kinds of details I enjoy.)

      So I have been giving this due diligence, but... *shrug* Yeah, we just need more content creators for it.

    3. I'll check out Lubrican when I can then. SkyBr also used to go under the username of SkyLiberty. I did a piece on his last known locations of work at the bottom of this thread:

      More content creators in general in this kinky interest that know what it's all about is what we need. I think we are getting there, slowly but surely.

    4. Ah yes. I thought the name sounded familiar. I've seen his stuff too. I hope he's been making more stuff. I'll have to check that out again.

      I suppose all we can do is wait. Except for the rps, I don't really find my own attempts at elit appealing.

  4. My favorite posts of yours are the hentai ones. I'd love to see more non-human/beastmen material on here; that can be hard to find. Thank you for all you do, I always look forward to seeing new posts!

    1. Thank you for the feedback. Sounds like you would enjoy Rastakax's blog. Anyone who likes beastmen and monsters breeding human women should pay his blog a visit and send him your compliments!

  5. Hey, first thanks for this great site. It really showed me how many others out there enjoy this particular fetish and is an excellent resource. I was wondering, do you take user submissions? Like when I find a video related to impregnation that you don't seem to have would you want people sending you the links? I imagine that could open you up for a lot of spam so I would understand any reticence.

    1. I highly enjoy receiving messages from my viewers, especially if they have something they think would be good to share on my blog. I haven't had any problems with spam, and I don't have many difficulties in taking care of it should that arise.

      If you think you have something (a movie, some pictures, a site) that you want to show me, I would love to see what you've got. Send it to my email at

      Thanks for the compliments and the question!